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I am continuing with my next book, called The Artist. Although this has been accepted for publication, it hasn’t yet been edited and I don’t yet have a date for publication, or a cover picture. This is an historical erotic romance, based in England in the 1850s. Theodore (Theo for short) is the son of a Viscount, but has rejected the life of an aristocrat to live as a rather bohemian artist. He has an eye for pretty girls, whom he likes to paint in the nude. Lizzie is a poor village girl who made a disastrous marriage, from which she has fled, and is destitute. When Theo asks her to be his artist’s model, she swallows her natural modesty and accepts. After their first session he decides to visit the Inn to see if the Landlord could supply some gossip about Lizzie’s background, and some food, as his daily woman is away tending a sick relative. Theo asks the Landlord if he knows Lizzie.
“You painting her?”
“Yes, she started yesterday. Came to me with a sad tale and looking destitute, and you know me, Albert, a sucker for a sob story. Besides that she has a pretty face and a tempting body, and I’m not known for turning away a beautiful woman in distress.”
“Got a reputation as a tart, Theo, from gossip I heard last time I was in the market at Chatterton. Seems her husband caught her in the arms of another man, not three months after he had wed her. Apparently the man ran off before he could lay his hands on him, but he threw his wife out there and then, without a penny to her name. Some say she has to beg for her food now after several respectable households turned down her pleading for a job as a maid or suchlike. My missus reckons she will probably be lifting her skirt and dropping her drawers for anyone who will have her. There don’t appear to be much sympathy for her around here it seems.”
Please do not be too hasty in judgement of Lizzie’s character, however, for all is not as it seems. All will be revealed in future snippets.
As I have no cover picture yet, I am again using a newspaper cutting of the two main characters in the TV series of Poldark. Again, I am probably breaking copyright rules, so shhh! But the actors are rather gorgeous, so I will use them, and hope that when I get a cover picture it is not too great a disappointment. The cover models will have a lot to live up to!
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Wow, the plot thickens. I am immediately wondering what the real story is about this gal!
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All will be clear in due course. Thanks for commenting.
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From this description of Lizzie, she sounds like the perfect woman for a bohemian artist. 🙂
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She might also be trouble with a capital T! Thanks for commenting.
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Intriguing already, Rachel! I like this story–good premise. 🙂
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Thanks Teresa. Lots of excitement to come.
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Women had it tough in those days, often judged harshly for mistakes not their own. Great snippet.
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Exactly. Her husband might come to regret throwing her out.
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Interesting. I somehow doubt we’ve had the whole story.
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Thanks Christina. No, there are lots of twists and turns to come.
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I think her luck is about to change . . . Nice tease, Rachel!
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Thanks Nancy. Yes, I think that going to the artist’s door was a good move for her.
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Poor Lizzie! Cant wait to hear her truth!
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Thanks Kim. I might have to spin this out a bit as I don’t yet have a publication date.
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Set up wonderfully. Love the dialogue – I could hear them. Tweeted.
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Thank you Daryl, and thanks for tweeting too.
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Beautifully written, Rachel. She’s not at all the woman painted to be.
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No she’s not, Charmaine. Thank you for visiting.
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And as you say, I immediately assume there’s more to the story about this girl – well done snippet!
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I probably should have let it all become clear in time, but I can’t bear that people should think ill of this sweet young girl. I become very protective of my characters.
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