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I am again taking a snippet from my new book The Russian Bride. I have gone back in time by two years from the earlier snippets. Natasha arrived home from school to the home she shared with her mother and her mother’s lover, Boris, to find that all was not well. Three armed men are with her mother and Boris, and they are definitely not there to take afternoon tea. (The snippet is creatively punctuated, to fit into the 10 line rule.)
The man Galina called Viktor stared hard at Natasha, making her very uncomfortable. “Your daughter is very pretty.”
His eyes moved up and down from her feet to the top of her head, and her flesh crawled, but she didn’t know why. Galina clutched her daughter to her tightly, as though she knew the purpose of Viktor’s hard stare.
“You can have her; if you let me go, you can take her with you, and her mother too. Take them both,” Boris said.
Natasha recoiled with shock at what she was hearing, and her mother opened her mouth and gasped. Viktor actually smiled for the first time; a cruel, evil smile.
“Well, well, Boris, so you are willing to hand over your wife and child in return for your own skin, are you?”
“She’s not my daughter, and Galina is not my wife – take them both, I’m sick of having them around me.”
Boris is so not a likeable character, is he? The scene continues next time.
Natasha, a Russian-born woman living in London, catches the eye of Viktor, a middle-aged Russian gangster. He wants her as his wife, the mother of his son, and his submissive partner in the kinky sex he enjoys at his isolated home near Saint Petersburg. But he doesn’t ask her to accompany him – he just takes what he wants.
Surprisingly, Natasha begins to accept her new life. Is she really a natural submissive, or has Viktor brainwashed her? Viktor is adamant that he will not have sex with her until they are married, but he shows her just how kinky he likes it by taking her to orgies held by his friend, and tells her that this is the type of life she can expect as his wife.
Everything turns sour, however, and on a visit to London, Natasha has to flee for her life – where businessman, James Miller, comes to her aid. Over the course of the next few days, Natasha tells James her story, and as horrified as he is, he cannot deny his attraction to the beautiful young woman. He vows to help her.
Neither of them realize quite how much danger they will be in for defying Viktor, but James is willing to risk everything to rescue her from this man. Can he do it? And does Natasha return his feelings?
Publisher’s Note: This fast-paced tale contains explicit themes including power exchange, capture, multiple sexual partners and discipline. If such material offends, please do not purchase.
Buy Links for The Russian Bride are:
Amazon US https://www.amazon.com/dp/B06XH4C3BW
Amazon UK https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B06XH4C3BW
Amazon Canada https://www.amazon.ca/dp/B06XH4C3BW
Amazon Australia https://www.amazon.com.au/dp/B06XH4C3BW
This scene has lots of great emotion and strong characterizations. Good job!
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Thanks, Ed.
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Oh my gosh! I want to call that Boris some really bad words. I’ll just say he’s a very heartless man instead. Poor Galina and Natasha!
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Yes, not a pleasant man to be around.
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Signed, sealed, delivered. In a single sentence. Well done, Rachel. You got my blood up- in righteous indignatio.
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Thank you, Kim.
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Wow, this makes me kinda hate Boris. I think anyone would share my feelings! Nice piece!
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Thanks, Jake. I’m afraid that there is worse to come! Stick with it. Thanks for commenting.
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Marvelous snippet filled with violence and fear. WOW!
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Thanks, Charmaine.
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I hope you have something hideous plans for Boris- something really painful.
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Oh, I do. But you have to wait until the end of the book to see what happens to him. Thanks, Daryl.
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I have a feeling no matter what Boris does, his own goose is cooked, but yeah, he’s not very likable at all! Fascinating snippet…
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I am afraid it is. But he will be a central character in the story for a while yet.
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to switch from Juliette to Rachel- you need to log out of blog or email – whichever it’s attached to. I used to have 2 blogs under 2 different pen names – it was the only way I could switch.
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Wow, what a betrayal.
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Yes, all he is interested in is saving his own skin.
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Yikes, what a jerk! I hope Boris gets what’s coming to him, though now I’m seriously worried about the ladies.
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You are right to be concerned.
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Chivalry truly is dead. What a jerk.
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I don’t think Boris even understands the term, chivalry.
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That Boris!
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Someone needs to smack Boris. I volunteer! 😉
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I fear that more than a smack is coming his way.
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Nasty guy! Lots of great emotion in this scene.
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Thank you, Diane.
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