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I am once again taking my snippet from The Russian Bride. Natasha, who was born in Russia but has spent some years in England, is kidnapped by a Russian criminal called Viktor, and her journey ends at his home, an isolated house in a rural area near St. Petersburg. Viktor takes Natasha into the house, where she meets two young women, who turn out to be Viktor’s lovers. Natasha assumes that she has been brought here to join their number, and is totally unprepared for what Viktor tells her next. (Some punctuation changes from the book to conform to the rules.)
Her voice trembled and was barely audible, “What do you want with me?”
“Well, little Natasha, you need have no fear of me; I am not interested in young girls and I will not touch you without your consent.” He paused, “You look surprised, so you think I am a monster, do you? She did not reply. “I intend to keep you here until you are older, and then I shall expect you to marry me and provide me with a son.”
Natasha stepped back suddenly, “You want me to marry you?”
He laughed. “You think that I am not the marrying sort? Just because I have floozies like those two in my bed, doesn’t mean that I don’t want a wife and child one day. And I have decided that you are ideal to mould into the perfect wife for me.”
(NB Just to clarify things – Natasha is 18 when she is kidnapped, even though Viktor often refers to her as a young girl. He is much older – in his fifties.)
This will be my last snippet from The Russian Bride. As you will know from my earlier snippets, Natasha manages to escape from Viktor after a year of marriage, and is rescued by James. However there are several twists and turns before the story ends. I may take a short break before I post again.
Natasha, a Russian-born woman living in London, catches the eye of Viktor, a middle-aged Russian gangster. He wants her as his wife, the mother of his son, and his submissive partner in the kinky sex he enjoys at his isolated home near Saint Petersburg. But he doesn’t ask her to accompany him – he just takes what he wants.
Surprisingly, Natasha begins to accept her new life. Is she really a natural submissive, or has Viktor brainwashed her? Viktor is adamant that he will not have sex with her until they are married, but he shows her just how kinky he likes it by taking her to orgies held by his friend, and tells her that this is the type of life she can expect as his wife.
Everything turns sour, however, and on a visit to London, Natasha has to flee for her life – where businessman, James Miller, comes to her aid. Over the course of the next few days, Natasha tells James her story, and as horrified as he is, he cannot deny his attraction to the beautiful young woman. He vows to help her.
Neither of them realize quite how much danger they will be in for defying Viktor, but James is willing to risk everything to rescue her from this man. Can he do it? And does Natasha return his feelings?
Publisher’s Note: This fast-paced tale contains explicit themes including power exchange, capture, multiple sexual partners and discipline. If such material offends, please do not purchase.
Buy Links for The Russian Bride are:
Amazon US https://www.amazon.com/dp/B06XH4C3BW
Amazon UK https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B06XH4C3BW
Amazon Canada https://www.amazon.ca/dp/B06XH4C3BW
Either way, the situation is horrible for Natasha. She is his prisoner regardless. You paint this villain very well.
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Thanks Jessica.
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Oy! Perfectly C.R.E.E.P.Y. Such a great beginning to her tale! It will make what follows, all the better. 🙂
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Thanks, Teresa.
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I’d say he might be worse than a cradle robber: he wants to steal her personality and make her into something different than she really is.
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Exactly! That’s why I’m pleased to tell you that he comes to a gruesome end.
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Viktor makes a very interesting villain, Rachel.
Good writing during your haitus, may your muses be with you
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Thanks Kim. Yes, I need to step up my writing again.
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Damn. Poor girl. I wonder how she managed to escape from such a horrible situation.
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Thankfully that is where the hero, James, comes in.
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Wow. So he’s just a kidnapper and not a pedophile. Doesn’t change his creepiness. The poor girl.
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I think we are all agreed that Viktor is a thoroughly bad man. But James is coming to the rescue!
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For the time, she’s trapped and then. . .more wonderfulness from you. This is the book I want.
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Thank you, Charmaine. But I must warn you that there is some very explicit sex in the book, that might not be your thing. I’ve been shielding you all.
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Ooh, I am not a fan of that age gap. She needs to run for the hills as soon as she spots the first opportunity!
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Which she does, thankfully. Then James, the good guy steps in.
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He says he won’t touch her without consent, but it is still a scary situation to be in!
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Yes. He is a bully and a criminal – and comes to a sticky end.
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While I’m glad he’s not mistreating her at the moment, his plans for her are seriously creepy!
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He’s a gangster who thinks he can just take what he wants.
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Poor Natasha, what a fate! Ugh. You write the arrogant old Russian oligarch very well BTW (not that I’ve ever met one LOL). Excellent excerpt!
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She manages to get away, thankfully, and he comes to a sticky end.
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Creepy old guy! Grooming her for a brood mare. Ewww! Run away!!
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Don’t worry, he obtains his just desserts!
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Yuck. I wish she had more say in her future. 😦
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He’s a bully. But don’t worry, he will suffer later.
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