Weekend Writing Warriors for Oct 1


Welcome again to the weekly blog where a group of writers get together and share snippets of 8 – 10 lines from their work, for others to read and comment. Once you have seen mine, why not pop along to the site (www.wewriwa.com) to see what others have written.

I am again taking an excerpt from my book Out of the Darkness, an erotic romance. Marianne, a beautiful and successful model appears to have a charmed life, but has faced struggles that are often overlooked by those who envy her success and lifestyle. She longs to find love, and someone who won’t let her down, as other men have done. One day, when she is in her mid-twenties, she meets a man in the First Class departure lounge, waiting for her New York flight. She feels drawn to him immediately. (Slight punctuation amendment to fit the rules.)

“So, Marianne, what takes you to New York, work or pleasure? Or perhaps the two come together for you.”

“Mainly work, although I am hoping to do a little shopping while I’m there. And you—work, I suppose?”

“Yes, but I never overlook the need for a little pleasure too. Life is too short for all work and no play. As someone once said, very few men on their deathbed say that they wished they had spent more time at the office—is that not true, Marianne?”

I loved the way he looked directly at my face as he spoke my name, even though he was sitting alongside. He gave me his complete attention, unlike many men who seemed to look everywhere but my face when they were talking to me. I often thought I should have a second pair of eyes on my breasts, so men could look at both at the same time.

So has Marianne finally found the man she has been looking for?

She lived every young girl_s dream IDarkness Twitter 4).

Out of the Darkness is an erotic romance, with elements of Dominance/submission between the characters involved. But it is basically the familiar story of a woman’s search for a man who will love her, and she him. Out of respect for the other writers, I am not including much erotica. If you want to read spicier extracts, go to the FB page for this book.(https://www.facebook.com/outofthedarknessnovel/)

She is one of the most beautiful and photographed women in the world.

She is living every young girl’s dream.

But sometimes the dream and the reality don’t match up.

The missing father; the predatory stepfather; the abusive lover; they all let her down.

Then she meets the man of her dreams – but fate is cruel and she is left alone again…

… until a powerful and charismatic Dom, who excites her like no other man before, steps into her life.

Is he the man she has been seeking her whole life? Will he show her the way out of the darkness and into the loving, submissive relationship she has always craved?

This book is now out on Amazon at:

Amazon US             http://amzn.to/2fP9rnL

Amazon UK               http://amzn.to/2w5qE2r

Amazon Canada       http://amzn.to/2uTiHcW

Amazon Australia     http://amzn.to/2uTtfsG

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14 thoughts on “Weekend Writing Warriors for Oct 1

  1. LOL! No kidding! I’ve always wanted a teeshirt that had an arrow pointed upward saying “Eyes up here!” Nice scene, Rachel. You establish their immediate comfort with one another.

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